Here is the second storyboard for the Bullying Animation:
As you can see I have altered the Storyboard by making it shorter by removing the clocks and placing them in their respective sections, as well as altering the perspective in some of the shots and trying to show the character movement better. While the drawing style is somewhat rough it gives the bully story line an emotive feel to it due to the fact that sometimes the neat drawings make it look like it is a good moment for the victim while the rough drawings make it look like the bad moments.
